Personality

When including an animal character in your story, it’s important to make sure they have a bit of a personality. Any animal owner in real life knows, each of their pets has a very different personality. This can even range based on the animal, cats are typically more aloof while dogs are more fun and friendly.

While animal characters obviously don’t need to have their personalities fleshed out the way your other characters will, you should at least have a few defining traits to play around with. For example, your character could have a German Shephard that is extremely protective and territorial, going off on anyone who so much as goes near their owner. Additionally, depending on the genre of your story, you could invent an animal with its own unique personality and biological traits. Think of at least three words that you could use to describe the personality of your animal character and base their actions throughout the story around those traits.

Quirks

An animal’s quirks will show rather than tell the reader about their personality traits. This can highlight a certain aspect of their personality while also allowing them to become a more unique character. For example, take the character Hedwig, the lovable owl from the Harry Potter series. There are many instances throughout the series where Hedwig refuses to deliver packages for Harry for various reasons. Perhaps he forgot to give her a treat after one of her deliveries or used another owl for a delivery because she wasn’t around. These actions result in Hedwig pouting at Harry, ruffling her feathers, and even pecking him if she’s feeling particularly upset. That is, until he threatens to use another owl for a delivery, and then she quickly drops her attitude.

These exchanges show off Hedwig’s sassy personality and intelligence while also allowing both the reader and Harry to connect with her on a more human level. You should strive to achieve these same goals within your own writing.

Emotional Intelligence

Showing the reader that the animal character has a level of emotional intelligence, which many animals do and all literary animals should, will allow the reader to connect with them on a human level. There’s nothing worse than reading a book with a seemingly useless animal character to which the reader has no real emotional connection. Even when it comes to an animal, a character that doesn’t establish any type of emotional connection with the reader is a waste of page space.

So how do you allow your animal character to connect with the reader in this way? This will happen primarily utilizing action considering that, unless you’re writing in the fantasy genre, your animal character won’t be using dialogue. For example, perhaps your protagonist had a particularly bad day and is laying in bed crying, only to look up and see their pet dog offering them their own favorite toy. Or maybe this comes in the form of your protagonist’s pet lizard refusing to leave their shoulder as they’re having an altercation with a friend. Think about what would fit your animal’s personality and find actions that you can use to show both their emotional intelligence and their relationship with different characters throughout the story.

Story Role

As stated previously, the last thing you want is to write in a useless animal character with absolutely no purpose or role within the story (other than to be cute). Your editor is going to cut them from your book so fast it will make your head spin. Instead, as you’re planning to write your animal character, make sure you ask yourself: what is their role or purpose in this story?

For example, let’s say you’re writing about a very pessimistic character with a tough exterior who had befriended an alley cat near his apartment complex. With everyone else in his life, he is blunt and harsh but when he’s around this cat he is suddenly a sweet ball of mush. The role of the cat in this story is to show the reader another side of this character that we wouldn’t normally see and allow them to draw conclusions as to why the character behaves this way. You must therefore ask yourself, what does this animal show the readers about my protagonist? How does this animal character push along the plot of the story? Does this animal character raise the stakes of my story in some way?

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Animals aren’t like other characters in your story, they’re less predictable and therefore our reactions to them are less predictable. Your character could be the most bitter and cruel person to other characters in the story, but he could have a completely heartfelt interaction with a puppy. How we react and feel around animals is completely different than how we feel about people in our lives. This means interactions with animals can be a great way to either create a redeeming moment for your character or to show more of who they are than your reader has previously seen.

a) Animal parallels character

One manner in which an animal will add to your story is through character parallels. We’re sure you’re familiar with the phenomenon of old cartoons where dogs always look exactly like their owners? Well, think of it like that. Perhaps your character’s relationship with an animal is that of being soulmates in a sense. It could be that the animal is the only being that the character feels connected with or the animal could comically mimic the gestures of the human they’re encountering. Your character could resent that the animal is following them around and seems to have a similar disposition to them. All of these instances tell us a little bit about your character that we wouldn’t be able to deduce otherwise.

b) Animal opposes character

This could come in two forms. It could be that, rather than highlighting the similarities between your character and the animal, that you do the opposite. Perhaps the kindness of the animal highlights the bitterness of your character. Or maybe the harshness of the animal highlights the kindness of your character as he or she tries to help it despite any inherent danger.

On the other hand, it could also be very literal in that the animal is either attacking or otherwise blocking your character from doing what they’re trying to do in the scene. In this instance, the animal is here to add conflict and provide your character with a situation of which they’ll need to think their way out.

c) Animal humanizes character

Animals not only have their own personalities to play around with, but we naturally see them as beings with more pure/honest motivations. Because we naturally have that sensitivity toward them, how your character treats an animal can help inform the reader on both another layer of who they are and how we’re supposed to be feeling about them. For example, let’s discuss the bitter character we mentioned earlier. If we’ve seen them be nothing but horrible to everyone, we likely won’t feel much other than disdain for them. However, if we see a touching scene where they save a dog they find on the streets, we’re suddenly rethinking our previous perception of them.

d) Animal dehumanizes character

Similarly to the previous example, just as easily as an animal interaction can humanize someone it can also dehumanize them. For example, let’s say you have a character who the reader has seen as nothing but nice thus far. If suddenly the reader witnesses a scene of that character kicking a dog, then now they’re rethinking that entire character and questioning if perhaps he’s not as nice as he first comes across. This can be used to foreshadow the true nature of that character being revealed later on in the story.

Writing Prompt:

Write a scene with a character from your book in which they have an experience with an animal. Perhaps they’re attacked by a shark? Or maybe they meet a homeless cat? Think about what type of scene would be the most revealing for this specific character and write that one.

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